Comments : Because Of You.

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    I can really relate to this .
    I loved this . It had emotion and it ran deep . I like the fourth and last stanza .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 11 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    This poem is AMAZING! Your rhyming flowed perfectly! I LOVE the last three stanzas the best!
    My sanity defeats me through all;
    I have my friends to thank to that.
    Thank you for never being there;
    Thank you for not having my back.

    My tears are dried up from you;
    I have my love to thank greatly.
    He saved me from my sorriness;
    He saved me from insanity.

    I'm broken because of you;
    Shattered in a million bits.
    Mended from a healing soul;
    Forgotten because you did it.

    Ooooo I'm adding you to my favorites!

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    People can be so mean.. Keep your head up.. Everything should get better soon. Good luck babe. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm i love the all lines i really feel the emotion.. i think im the one in this situation. very nicely written great job5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by just a little girl

    Although not my favourite it was the best technically written poem you gave me to look at. again very emotional about about someone that has hurt you so much, keep it up.

  • 11 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Great!! I love the emotian in the poem. Love the rhyming. Great flow. A truly great poem! Keep them up becuase there great!! xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Minkus

    You had good rhythm throughout this poem and it had a strong, though harsh, message that you portrayed well. 5/5; excellent job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Angelmom

    You are very talented.

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashley Ann

    OOOHH...Nice poem! :D I dont see a think wrong with it. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammie

    Wow! I love it. My favorite stanza's are the fourth and sixth one. I can relate to this alot! Keep it up! =] 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by awww

    Awww.... the emotion was so well expressed i felt it through my heart... the rhyming was great... you've got talent... the flow and meaning were there... all i can say is wow... great job keep writing!

    ~angel~

  • 11 years ago

    by kelS;

    Wow its really good because you can relate to it really good. the rhyming was really good and its really easy to follow! good job! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Aww wow. A very deep and touching poem. =) But I didn't think it should be in the friends section. I know it could be under broken friendship, but I personally would've rather put it in the sad poems.

    Anywho...The poem was very touching. It sounds like you're going through a rough time with your friends, and you're very sesitive about it. I know what it's like to lose a good friend in many ways. Very well written. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Aww, what a beautiful poem. Your words flowed through my heart, they were so very touching. I am amazed. I simply loved this, and I am glad you have asked for me to come around. Wonderful work my friend. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    This was a great poem.
    Very descriptive of how you're feeling and I cant begin to tell you how it effected me mentally.

    5/5
    for your excellence in getting the point across.
    ~Emma

  • 11 years ago

    by Becky

    Wow this poems is really great, the words you chose fit greatly in with the mood, it flowed so easily no stopping and trying to figure out what it meant. great work keep it up

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 11 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is sad but i can really relate to it. i like it a lot. i think you did a wonderful job writing it. so much emotion in it. keep writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 11 years ago

    by BooBa

    So sad:( sometimes i feel the same way.. keep writiting ur rrly good

  • 11 years ago

    by Just Another Dreamer

    Hey. you're such an awesome writter. your choice of words really makes all the difference. just simple words like fling, really give it something special, in comparison to many poems. i absoloutly love the last stanza though:

    I'm broken because of you;
    Shattered in a million bits.
    Mended from a healing soul;
    Forgotten because you did it.

    i don't know. i guess i can just totally relate to this.

    anyways. absoloutly amazing! great job! 5/5 withought a doubt :D

  • 11 years ago

    by ForeverGoneInYourEyes

    That was great 5/5