Comments : Poor Girl

  • 17 years ago

    by xkillakellys

    I really like it..and i like the way u entied God into it
    great poemm!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Hannah Emellia

    Aww. sad. really worth a five alll the way. ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Nici

    Awwww. tht made me cry it was soo good. its so true aswel, well done, i love it! i rated 5, its so good i would have rated more!

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    AW,this poem made tears fill up in my eyes.
    This is a great poem so much emotion i loved it the whole time i was readying congratulation with the poem!!
    xoxroxyxox btw
    No family to support her
    No God in her life
    No job to earn money
    No man to be his wife(shouldnt it be no man to be her husband)

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsea Sprite

    Excellent! I loved it! Keep up with the writing!!

    ~~Spanish

  • 17 years ago

    by Mayra

    Omg i love this poem it was really great i made really think about life keep u the great work!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Black Rose

    Hmm it's a good poem, but it's not my style though i like the word useage
    it's good poem and i think u got alot more in you, keep up the good work ;)

    Grtz from a Vampire

  • 17 years ago

    by Travis

    Very kool poem i love it solid gold

  • 17 years ago

    by kamal

    Your poem topic is touchy. The idea is good. I would probably suggest a bit more visual description of her and her condition, although you have done that. But keep writing! I would like to read more on this topic, if you can blossom more visualisation.
    Kamal from Sydney

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Percival

    Love it! it sad but it has hope and a some what happy ending!
    good job chick!
    5 for you!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fluffy

    "There once was a poor girl
    With dreams of a better life
    Dreams of a God and family
    Dreams of no strife".

    -This one stood out the most. I don't know why, but it did. It's not my style of poetry, but like Vampire commented, there is strong word usage and there is an emotive atmosphere.
    Well done and keep writing :).

    -Elysium.x

  • 17 years ago

    by NeNe

    I luv thz poem

  • 17 years ago

    by AshleyMarie*

    That really sad.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    This is so great i loved it

  • Umm its well written but i dont belive in god

  • 17 years ago

    by Rene

    Oh my god, I feel your poem so much, I don't really live in such a good neighborhood, so I kinda know what it's like. I like the whole poem, you didn't repeat yourself and it's straight to the point. Excellent, oh and I'm sorry I didn't answer your private message sooner. I didn't notice you sent me one.

  • 17 years ago

    by christine

    Excellent! I loved it! Keep up with the writing!!
    I really like it..and i like the way u entied God into it
    great poemm!!!