A wonderfully written poem, it's so full of emotion.. It flowed superbly.. well done 5/5 xx

Awww..... wow mel, thats an amazing poem.... great work! i love your rhyning and the flow is flawless!
definatly 5/5!

~Murder.

Wow really heartfelt i love it!!!!

-Mel

Wow that was excellent... kind of eerie... nice job 5/5

Wow. This poem is...wow. Lol. I don't know how to explain my feelings for it. The emotion was so raw, and fulfilling. The first stanza made me want to read so much more of it. And the last gave me an impression that there could be a sequel. Duh duh duhhhhh. Lol.

The flow was excellent, except in a few minor parts, and as I said before, the emotion was superb. I lvoed the way you applied it to a poem and took the time to write it. You have great talent. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha