Comments : The descending

  • 12 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Great poem it has such deepness in it. i love that. great poem keep it up. shanik

  • 12 years ago

    by Letty

    This was very deep and it pulled me in. Now this is type of work I expect from you sense your so brilliant. The flow of this poem was excellent, the meaning was picture perfect. Keep up the great work. 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Wow. I don't know why no one else voted on this poem but it was amazing!
    Keep up the great work!
    I've enjoyed reading your poems.
    I'm not really into the sad depressing poems but these were nice.
    Thank you very much for commenteing my poems!
    God Bless 5/5


  • 11 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Very deep, I loved it. The emotion in this poem pulled me right in. Amazing job!!!

    Peace, Joe

  • 11 years ago

    by Corinne

    Well done Keath. I especially like that last line.