Mascara Covered Eyes..

by Sophie   Oct 24, 2006


Girl stands around,
Wearing her disguise.
Smile is forced.
Mascara covered eyes.

She sees him walking by,
Puts on her high pitched laugh,
She tries so hard to impress.
Pulls her skirt to show her calf.

He doesn't give her any notice.
Obviously he couldn't care.
Seems oblivious to her sight.
Doesn't see her standing there.

She thinks she has a shot,
With the hottest guy in school.
Thinks she's a looker,
But really a blind fool.

This is what happens ,
When someone takes a chance,
Ends up falling face first.
Not even a second glance.

*Completely random topic, not happening to me*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow, sophie! That was awesome, I loved it! It was so harsh but very well done.. I really enjoyed it, lol. It was very interesting, the flow worked well, and I just loved it! =P I think you should change the title though.. I think it lets the poem down a bit.. Try putting in something that will make the reader want to read it.. Like "Maskara Covered Eyes" or "The Hottest Guy In School" lol.. I don't know, your title is fine if you like it! =] Keep up the excellent work hunny! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This random topic that you picked is an very common issue with teenagers and no one yet has ever written anything abt it or atleast i hvnt come across so far.....every one goes thro this stage...its just a matter of time and then there is one phrase in which i really believe

    if you lick john bull, he will kick u
    if u kick john bull, he will lick u

    ignore others to get attention or pay attention to get ignored

    all the best and take care

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