Comments : Mascara Covered Eyes..

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This random topic that you picked is an very common issue with teenagers and no one yet has ever written anything abt it or atleast i hvnt come across so far.....every one goes thro this stage...its just a matter of time and then there is one phrase in which i really believe

    if you lick john bull, he will kick u
    if u kick john bull, he will lick u

    ignore others to get attention or pay attention to get ignored

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow, sophie! That was awesome, I loved it! It was so harsh but very well done.. I really enjoyed it, lol. It was very interesting, the flow worked well, and I just loved it! =P I think you should change the title though.. I think it lets the poem down a bit.. Try putting in something that will make the reader want to read it.. Like "Maskara Covered Eyes" or "The Hottest Guy In School" lol.. I don't know, your title is fine if you like it! =] Keep up the excellent work hunny! 5/5