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I'm speechless! That was so perfect and outstanding!! I can't find anything wrong with it. It flowed so well and i loved your word choice and imagery! Excellent write!!
Hey there, thanks for commenting on mine! I really like the emjambent in this poem, it makes it seem very real. Maybe check on your grammar in places, although if you have used it as a technique then ignore me!
Wow i love your poems and i guess we have alot in common because i can totally relate to your poems!! well good job!
by just a little girl
I agree with all the comments written so far, i am going through this experience at the moment with a so called friend and i can really relate to this and so can so many other people.
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is so good! I loved it! 5/5
by Simple Sensation
Great read!! This is a really great poem. It had a great flow nad created a great imagery. The words used also made this peom a worthwhile read! Keep it up! xx
Very well written. Welcome to my favorites. I hope you keep writeing.
by Roses and lilys
Very good poem. i can some what relate. Good job keep up the great work:)
Nice poem i feel like that to a friend....it's sad
by Marylou L
You did a very good job with putting a visual in my mind. keep up the good work. 5/5