Comments : Too Much To Ask.

  • 11 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    I'm speechless! That was so perfect and outstanding!! I can't find anything wrong with it. It flowed so well and i loved your word choice and imagery! Excellent write!!


  • 11 years ago

    by milly

    Hey there, thanks for commenting on mine! I really like the emjambent in this poem, it makes it seem very real. Maybe check on your grammar in places, although if you have used it as a technique then ignore me!

  • 11 years ago

    by jessica

    Wow i love your poems and i guess we have alot in common because i can totally relate to your poems!! well good job!

  • 11 years ago

    by just a little girl

    I agree with all the comments written so far, i am going through this experience at the moment with a so called friend and i can really relate to this and so can so many other people.

  • 11 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so good! I loved it! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Great read!! This is a really great poem. It had a great flow nad created a great imagery. The words used also made this peom a worthwhile read! Keep it up! xx

  • 11 years ago

    by FallingAngel

    Very well written. Welcome to my favorites. I hope you keep writeing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Very good poem. i can some what relate. Good job keep up the great work:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Shelly

    Nice poem i feel like that to a's sad


  • 10 years ago

    by Marylou L

    You did a very good job with putting a visual in my mind. keep up the good work. 5/5