Comments : Mother...

  • 17 years ago

    by Shauni

    Wow, lots of feeling. It gave me the chills. For people who aren't in this situation, I guess they sort of understand better of how it effects a person. So I think it is very thought filled, and filled with feeling.

  • 17 years ago

    by softmember

    Good 5/5?

  • 17 years ago

    by Alex

    I am so glad that you submitted another poem, and I love this one even more than the first. Poems are best served powerful, whether it be happy or sad. Keep it up.

    P.S. It doesn't matter if it rhymes!

  • 16 years ago

    by Emilie

    This was written very well with true feeling. It's very nice <3

  • 15 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    Awww. This made me sad, it reminds me of one of my friends whose mother did the same thing. This was very emotional and I liked it a lot.
    It's going on my favorites, 5/5