Comments : Rubbish

  • 17 years ago

    by Jochsey

    Dace i hope you know none of us think you rubbish.

    But on a good note its an excellent poem

  • 17 years ago

    by someoneimnot

    One mans trash is another mans treasure. just need to find that "another".

    XsomeoneimnotX

  • 17 years ago

    by Georgia

    Thanx 4 all the comments really liked this poem 5/5
    xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by kiara

    This was so different i really enjoyed it one thing is 4 sure your poetry could never be rubbish
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I felt that the repetitve word rubbish throughout the poem establishes your feelings very strongly. this was very well written and the rhyme scheme was wonderful and it flowed great as well. definately a favorite poem of mine. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow! This is a very powerful piece. Wonderful write. & just to let you know I definitley don't think your rubbish. :] 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Awww... dont ever blame yourself for anything that happens like that...shit happens because life's messed up but nice job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is interesting. Obviously you were angry and upset etc, at the time. It shows through the poem, it's full of emotion. But well done with this. 5/5

    Tammie

  • 16 years ago

    by Kalee

    You can really tell that you put alot of emotion into it. But you should know none of us think that you are rubbish. On another point, great poem. 5/5 as always

    Kalee

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Why bother trying is a harsh question 5/5 your not rubbish