Very well written. Great poem maybe for next time the 2nd verse is a bit different from the other 2 i think if you write a poem to make it flow well its btter to make all the verses eaqual. But very well written.

Wow babe...im so happy to know that i am loved by a wonderful guy. i guess he has made me forget about bj. i havent talked to him in like 2 weeks now...that makes me sad but i guess i just need to forget about him...right loves...

Beautiful words of love!

The last two lines were so sweet hun.
try to make all your stanzas the same amount of lines and the same rhyming pattern to help it flow.

much love and many kisses,
bex