Comments : Life without you(amr)

  • 17 years ago

    by Autuumnbree

    Good poem, with alot meaning in it, just my opinion you should do a spelling check. Beiside all it a nice poem....NP

  • 16 years ago

    by Jodie Phillips

    This is a good poem, really heartflet good work

  • 15 years ago

    by LOVEmeNOT

    Ok i think this goes back to re-reading everything and asking yourself ok how can i make this better. Can i switch some words around that keeps the same meaning but turns the sentence into a simile or something. Like also just the spelling and seeing if you missed any words.

  • 15 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I know how you feel and it hurts alot sometimes...I love how you put your feelings into this poem..Good Job 5*5