Distorted Immortality

by loretta Taylor   Oct 28, 2006


Distorted Immortality

She was young and strong
Gloriously firm
Athletic, long and lean

She had a love for all
Ethereal magical fantasies
Legendary and glorious

Youth ignores
The promise of death
Ten foot high and bulletproof

Unicorns intrigued her
Strong, powerful
Magical beasts

The legend lived
Tattooed on her breast
Alive on taunt firm flesh

But, humans are not immortal
And time distorts
Mere flesh, bone and skin

Youth dies with age
Another year, another page
Life extracts surface beauty

A magical beast
Lays dying
Disfigured on her breast

A once-strong head
Bows and genuflects
To the weight of age

The once-strong horn
Straight and magical
Lays gnarled and grotesque

A gruesome creature
Belies a life
Lived with honesty and respect

She was once beautiful
Energetically alive
Long and lean

Now...
Death decays immortality
Tattooed on a breathless chest

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  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ....Must I say that was scary? Not scary as in fera but just...thought provoking and well thought out and planned. Excellent job. Presented itself quite well. The words were cool and it had this great expression that remained. Created the hook needed to draw a reader into it. Cool write.
    ~Fallen

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    Age is such a hateful thing! great job expressing it.