Comments : Pixie Ha Ha

  • 12 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    That's a wonderfully funny one, Angela! i've always loved the fairy world and this one was real cool!

    peace
    shobhana

  • 12 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Aww lol cute poem, and very well written, you must have a great imagination, there are a few spelling mistakes in here, so maybe you should cheak that, but other than that thsis poem was very good..deffinatly a 5/5..
    if you get time could you please read and comment on my poems, it would be much apprechiated, and ill return the favour lol. Kirsty xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Peter DeJesse

    Great write. Really cute.

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Oh my....angela, how you make me smile....simply yet sweet penned you potray here, lovely piece!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mona S

    An excellent rthym and cute storyline!

  • 12 years ago

    by JLT

    Ahhh, that's so cute. I love it.
    Heart, Jessica.

  • 12 years ago

    by softmember

    Very funny i like it i am still laughing 7/7
    peace be with u
    softmember

  • 12 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Lol, very nice. I especially like the last stanza. Great job. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Krissey

    Lol...this si super Cute Ang I love it!! He was an ugly flea..haha that made me laugh and this is such a "you poem"...I have no idea what I mean by that but heck I'm a goof!
    Excellent write it was so cute!
    Kristy and Chelsey
    Krissey

  • 12 years ago

    by Laybelled with a name

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA!!! funy...... :)

  • 12 years ago

    by LawRah

    Cute poem:)

  • 12 years ago

    by SOinLOVEwithYOU

    I like this alot...keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Thats cute

  • 12 years ago

    by RACHELLE

    Cute

  • 12 years ago

    by xo.cherry.ox

    Haha omg I love it!! so cute ^-^

  • 3 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thank you so much for writing this! This really made me smile and laugh, it was not only funny, it was silly, cheeky and childish all rolled into one.

    The words fat fly just made me laugh - I do not know why they are so amusing, but they are.

    I liked the flow to this, and the rhyme, it was not forced and felt really enjoyable to read. It is a poem you could read again and again, and it is a really therapeutic poem to cheer you up.

    Well done, and thank you for making me smile.