Worthless Day

by Cody   Oct 29, 2006


Hunting circling prowling in the night
twisting turning yearning for a fight
looking seeking life balanced on the blade of a knife

whispering screaming just to be heard
crying dying one more empty word
waiting fading just so it can burn

hating painting a picture of shame
falling losing all that made me sane
struggling shouting just more pain

looming mounting walls of fear
beating reaching no one is near
calling bawling the world will not hear

failing railing no one said life is fair
burning learning no one really cares
killing feeling such a sad affair

needing leaving no reason to stay
feeding bleeding time to go away
trying surviving one more worthless day

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  • 17 years ago

    by Erika

    Well hey I haven't been on in a while but I just got on and decided to check out some of your poems again I haven't really written in a while but between you and I I still really LOVE that Cody guy the I always used to write about, but we just ended badly, I guess I just had to tell someone and I figured you'd be someone good to tell... considering you don't know this kid and it's not like you're going to really be able to do anyting about it. I really wish we could talk more or something, but GOOD POEM...

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Oh wait lmfao there was internal ryhme *coughs* opsy

  • 17 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Thankyou for all your comments cody that was super sweet of you dear. Ily too ^_^

    Rhyming, you seem to like it, stick with it =] maybe try internal rhyming some time too

    sorry it took me a while to commmmmmmment but it sounds like you need some of my homemade fudge, instead of a fighting spree XD

    lol I missssss you email me soon please xx

    Jenn

  • 17 years ago

    by Robyn

    Aww cody cheer up.. i hope things turn a bright coner for u soon
    keep in touch
    robyn xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    HAHA! Dibsies!! *dances like a monkey* I read first! I read it first! 5/5!!!!!!!!! That was awesome! I LOVED the internal rhyme!
    PV