Trying To Capture Your Heart

by Rene   Oct 30, 2006


You pushed me away without understanding me
Not knowing how deeply I feel for you
I am stupid for trying to impress you, and although I am not selfish or ignorant
For you my dear, myself I may not be

Affection halted, and our souls slowly part
I am here trying to capture your heart

Only for you will I get down on my knees and plea

I am not the best of men
I have made many mistakes
Hopefully my heart will beat again; my intentions are good.
For your love I will do it all it takes
My love is pure; will I ever be understood?

Affection halted, and our souls slowly part
I am here trying to capture your heart

Only for you will I get down on my knees and plea

You are far more experienced, kind, and practical
You bring me up when I am down
Your smile; heals my frozen heart
Although, your frown;
It just tears me apart

Affection halted, and our souls slowly part
I am here trying to capture your heart

Only for you will I get down on my knees and plea

*Dedicated to Lashonda Troy, October 30, 2006*
*Please comment if you like, I'm also open to criticism.*

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  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Wow, really good and heartfelt. 5/5, thanx for the comment on my Tupac poem, it only took a few min. by the way. im glad you liked it, tupac is my idol.

  • 17 years ago

    by PoeticJustice

    Wow, really good and heartfelt. 5/5, thanx for the comment on my Tupac poem, it only took a few min. by the way. im glad you liked it, tupac is my idol.

  • 17 years ago

    by ESMERALDA

    Awwwww how cute i loved dis poem keep up the great jb cause dis is great writting no joke bout it

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie Bug :)

    This girl is extremely lucky. I absolutely loved it. You're a phenominal writer. Don't ever let anyone ruin your desire to write. Phenominal.... Great job. Wow...

    5/5

    -always wanting to read more
    -Katie