I think i understand the meaning behind it. Well, even if i got it wrong, i still think the poem is great. I sometimes get lost in the words and have to re-read it to understand it, but that's just me =P Another excellent write, i think you did a great job of writing this. A deeper meaning expressed through a story of a flower. I'm sorry if i got all that wrong, but i still think its great. =] Keep it up hun. 5/5

Tammie xo

Beautiful...i do love this...like i know it seems stoopid to call this kinda poem beautiful but i find you expressed raw emotion...bye xxx

I liked the rhyming scheme, it was different. As for the deeper meaning, what I got from it was;

A flower slowly dying, as it's petals are dropping off. It was left in darkness, so, without sunlight it will die.

Now the deeper meaning is.. hope. When a person has lost all hope, it seems like they are fading away, like they want to die. Slowly, they begin to fall apart, like the petals of a flower. Well, that is what I got from the poem. Let me know if I'm right or wrong.

Great poem sis!

Wow, that was really good hun. The imagery was stunning and the ideas were very unique. The flow was good and the emotion was very clearr. Wonderful work, Ily! 5/5

I think Darien has a good explaination for the possible deeper meaning but I wa smore caught in the image of a fading flower loses it's grip, stem, or it's support for life. Your vocab was pretty darn decent and the rhyming carried a soft beat to it that it felt easy to read without stumbling.

Well a guy i knew recently killed himself and this poem really reminded me of the lost feelings of no hope that compel people to go there, i think it's well written and very provocative!

Hey darl a powerful poem xx

Wow, for some reason i can really relate to this poem. well-written and great vocabulary.

5/5

That is so beautiful.....And i think i've found the deeper meaning....

I loved it, the meaning that i got is that its a metaphor for a person who is tired, someone who tries so hard but is reaching the end of their strengths