I wanted to be the VERY FIRST to comment you. I love you with all of my heart and soul. Andddd I'm sorry about last night. I've had a temper the past few days. And I know, I know I need to get over it! Lol I love you. And it REALLY IS A GREAT POEM.

-Mallory

P.S. Call me if I don't call you.

Wow...really nice...and sorry for what happened to you

That is an excellent poem u have got there, u have tallent in you. *shay*

Once again...brilliant work. I know how this feels...well I think I do. A boy just recently broke up with me and I'm tired of missing him and crying over him although I can't help it...he was my everything. 5/5

Take Care-
stargazer38

P.S. I love your quote
about forever...really touched
me.

Rele beautiful poem ...
loved it ..

Rides unicorn over rainbow yah!!
ok nice peom its very orginial
even though i wish it was about unicorns. ALrigth have a very rainbowie day bye bye now

Once again, your piece is clearly brilliant. you have always had good writing.. sorry i haven't been around to comment lately. keep it up jess, i've always loved what you write

heidi b

Beautiful. I like the structure and depth of your poetry. You truly have a talent and it seems as though through your poem you can understand how fairytales can heal reality. Great job!

The first line and the title of this piece caught my attention and made me curious as to how you would make this a love poem. I really like the way you did though. The only downside to this piece is the repetition in the middle and end, that just took the charm of the piece away. However the final line did bring some of that back though.