Wow! I did not see this coming. What a vivid imagination. Loved this write. Flowed well and the consept was outstanding.

Great job.

Happiness
Jeannie

Incredible imagery and perfectly written! There is nothing i would change! The last stanza left me speechless!!! My only suggestion is to capitalize the words in the title. Amazing poem! Keep up the good work!

xxEvilAngelxx

Too good! The imagery was vivid. And it was really cool. It seemed completely different than expected. Well done. The imagery and just the overall quality that this had was excellent. Really was caught by surprise with what I didn't exactly expect. Totally cool and really excellent. There’s not much else to say about this except that it was awesome.
~Faith-less

WHOOOO!!!!
That was definitely a better of your poems, and it shows me you have talent. And talent very well spent.
It would be a shame for you not to write more of these extravagant poems!

Excellent. another descriptive peice from you:) loved it...really good story line...wow. 5/5

O WOW!! amaizing poem.. x11348347 lol i lovelovelove
lovelove..love....

...love this poem.. your just such an amazing writer.. SPECTUALUAR

Omg this is so cool! haha i didn't expect your lover in this poem to turn out to be a wolf!! lol that was brilliant.. once again a very clever idea. nice ryhming, flow, and detailing. Talent is just written all over you!! 5/5 :)

This is so beautifully and elegantly written...i loved the whole concept behind this. on the whole, i found this to be am original and unique piece of writing.