Comments : Mr. Close Enough

  • 10 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Haha this is sooooooo true and i agree with everything especially the last stanza great job keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Kayla

    Lol!! i love it!! that is very true, and very funny also! haha keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    Hehe, really cute ending.
    Fab poem!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • Ha ha this is so true and cute!!! I love it!!!! Great Job!!! 5/5!! flow and rhyme were good!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    LOL! Very nice, and true. (sadly enough) 5/5

    -Luna

  • 10 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    True, true, true. No truer sentiments were said about the male population.

    Oh, and by the way, thanks for the comment on "Praying for the Sunrise". I know it wasn't my usual style, but was trying something different, because someone suggested that I needed to get out of my abab rhyme scheme. I wasn't too happy with it either. Thanks for you honesty. Did trully appreciate it.

    Happiness
    Jeannie

  • 10 years ago

    by kyle orr

    Funny and nice very nice

  • 10 years ago

    by LawRah

    Hehe so true lol

  • 10 years ago

    by Bonnie

    This is an awesome poem! I agree with it 100%. Very good job...i loved it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Ciera

    Yo thats nice. I wrote a poem called Mr. right. Lol I like ya clouse enough one.

  • 10 years ago

    by mellmer

    This is pretty much one of the raddest poems ever and it is just TOO true :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    That was so excellent! Great job Jpoet. This was waaay too funny, yet true (how sad,lol) but ILOVED the twist at the end. Great job!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 10 years ago

    by melly xx

    Omgoodness, this poem made me laugh so hard, which is what it was supposed to do.
    it's so true too! my dad leaves his clothes on the floor, he's master of the remote, he talks about his boring sports too!
    "You'll know exactly what I'm saying
    When I say there's no Mr. Right"
    those were my favorite lines, and hunny, i know EXACTLY what your talking about..=)
    haa i can't get over this poem!
    5/5 definetly!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    You went and got me all excited thinking someone actually liked my poem, but no! It's just CHARISMA! LOL

    ...which btw I do like, lol. I'll ttyl! = )
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 10 years ago

    by leanne

    Yes i agree good poem keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Hahaha, I liked this, and found it to be true.
    I liked the ending, I thought it was sweet.
    I enjoyed the flow, rhyme scheme and imagery as well. Good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jen

    This poem is so bloody true :)
    i liked the rhyming in it good job =]=]=]
    ~*~Jen~*~

  • 10 years ago

    by debbylyn

    You know them too well....how true! Nice poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Amani

    I really like this poem...its adorable
    keep up the good workkk!

  • 10 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This is cute and funny!