Dying Inside

by Bloomed Rose   Nov 3, 2006


My pillow's drenched with my tears as I lay here sobbing
I've been hurt so badly, yet no one knows my secret pain.
My heart wants to heal itself, wants to heal this feeling inside of me
I hate myself for all the hurt in my friends eyes
For the water trickling down their cheeks
I've tried and tried to be perfect, but no matter what I do
I only end up making a fool of other people, or of myself
And now I am still laying here, ashamed of me, of who I am
And even though there a thousand words in my mind
There are only two words to describe the way I feel
I'm DYING INSIDE. . . . . . . .

Dedicated to Briana, Leslie, and Aubrey . . .

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  • 17 years ago

    by bmichelle

    Fredd luvs it!!! thanks 4 dedicating it 2 us !!!
    luv ya bobb

    Fredd (Aided Only By The Heavenly)Briana

  • 17 years ago

    by aUbReY mIcHeLlE

    Pretty darn good. thx for dedicating it to me. love ya
    Aubrey

  • 17 years ago

    by Anonymous

    How sad. Pretty good for a poem that doesn't rhyme. The emotion goes great with the dark grey borders- like someone wearing fading eyeliner. :[
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Touching... I loved the last line. So simple but it packs so much emotion and meaning into those three words! Definitaly 5/5

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    This is really really great poem with a 5/5 vote, you really deserve it

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