My life is gone

by David   Nov 4, 2006


When life gets you down
And no one is around
You just want to die
To forget all those lies

Why bother trying
When you are just lying
To yourself about your whole life
Just get out of your strife

Just use the gun
And know they have won
For bringing you to your feet
And for once in your life to be complete

You release the pain
About your many troubles
You are going to just die
There is not even the thought why

So death is a friend
And dying is your purpose
This is the real end
But you know it will be worth it

Cause for why should I live
And why fight the pain
I have got nothing to give
And what will I gain?

I tried to help you
I said go and be happy
To stop being so blue
And think life is so (rappy

Cause for your words say
That I am also (rap
And now you don't want me to stay
As if you have given me my last slap
On the face
And you say give us the world of space

as i die this dawn, i know this
my life is gone

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    by NinjaGirl

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    by Stephanie Naylor

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