Well.Mel this poem touched me so much.I don't really know how to explain why but i used to get bullied and i still knidda do still get bullied.This poem i think can touch others because most people feel the same way there always hurt inside and im glad i read this poem thnx u helped me!!
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Wow this is soooo good i liked it sooo much it expressed so much emotion i guess its cuz i can relate i wish i could write like you 5/5

I liked this poem, Bullying really is a sad thing a lot of schools in my area have been going through as I'm sure many others...its not even just schools which is the sad thing...I do think you could have exaggerated this poem a little longer and touched on some other topics about bullying, but it was short and right to the point...I enjoyed!
Krissey

I think that is a REALLY good poem. It is one that a lot of people can relate to. keep writing.

A very good poem.. the rhythm and flow was excellent. 'speek' in the 2nd stanza should be 'speak' [?] but other than that this is very well done.. 5/5 xx

Unfortunately bullying happens way too much and in my experiences they really don't care how much pain they cause.

Well i thought it was excellent frm beginnin to end!!!! xx

Awww..... wow Mel that is so great! I love it! your really tallented! Sounds abit familliar to me at the moment, but im sure itll pass!
Keep strong bootiful

`Murder.

Wow.. i know how you feel. i've been bullied all my life. it's not fun. it makes us feel utterly worthless and hopeless inside.

ps.. can you plz read my poem : please hold me tight? maybe you can relate somewhat?

I can't find words to describe.. anyone can relate to this poem be it the person who bullied or the one being bullied... but i really really love this poem. Bless you for writing this!

I totally feel you on this poem, i was bullyed all through junior high and i no the pain and wt its like to cry yourelf to sleep at night...this poem is hott