Comments : The Photo of You

  • 11 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    Awwww such a sweet poem. Who knew two Italians would fall in love? =] Beautifully written Jobo 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Aww that was really touching. good job xx

  • 11 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    "The happiness glows
    From deep within"

    Ohhhh, gotta love it. Awsome flow.
    That was really awsome. The best thing about it is I can imangin you sitting there looking at the photos... 5/5 buddie. :]

    Dean- Keep it real..

  • 11 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Gr8 poem!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    Aww, cute poem! In the last line, I think you mean "meet" not "met". Also, this line: "And when I'm not" in the fifth stanza doesn't fit, the flow is off... I would suggest changing it to something else... Other than that, wonderful job!

    xxEvilAngelxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Tormented

    Awww, that was so CUTE!
    Very nicely written
    Nice emotions
    Nice flow!
    Loved It!
    Very sweet!

    SMILE
    `*-Tormented

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very nice. Emotions are greatly conveyed in this.

    The only thing that threw me off was the 5-lined stanza at the end. All the previous stanza's are four lines long, so this was a little awkward since it was longer.

    4/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem reflects a lot of romantic imagery. I wiil say again that it takes talent to make a poem flow freely. You have that talent

  • 11 years ago

    by ashley

    Omg that how i fill about my ex but its even harder cuz he left me and he sits there and say he still love me....lol...

  • Another beautifully written poem... i loved it 5/5 keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Monika

    Omg i love this poem its exacally like i feel omg omg i love it great jog wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! seriously i think this is the best it matches my every feeling!

  • 11 years ago

    by in spite of love

    Wow, this is deep... ^-^ 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by maymay

    I love this poem. it is amazing, i know exactly how you were feeling when you wrote it, amazing poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice Poem. I love it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Wada

    This peom is one of the sweetest love peoms ive ever read,
    it is so from the heart..
    simple words yet really from the inside of ur heart..
    good luck

  • 11 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    Its cute.

  • 11 years ago

    by The one and only[bre]

    That is so passionate, it shouws how much you care for someone!! AWWW grat job keep it up :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Gullan

    Ohh such a sweet and nice poem u have written keep going on with ur nice poems

  • 11 years ago

    by husbandlover

    Awwww this is so cute!!

  • 11 years ago

    by steve

    Whys this not rated higher?? its got great feeling to it.... too many people think poetry has to rhyme