Mistress Of The water

by Laybelled with a name   Nov 4, 2006


Her hair was as fine as an angels,
her body, so thin it could snap,
she gracefully swam though salty waters,
never hoping to return back.

her eyes glistened like two crimson satires,
her heart was a crimson stream of blood,
her face perfectly symmetrical in every way,
her skin was sensually soft,
and could captivate you with just one touch.

she glided through swamps and made her mark,
for whenever she was near you could feel it,
her presence could bring back the dead,
but she had a tortured heart and her burning heart was lit.

black flames filled her thoughts like deadly poison,
as she longs for some form of human contact,
shes a dot missing from a solar system of millions,
but she never longs to return back.

shes a stream,a water fall trickling through,
a splashing stream sliding down slop,
shes a poisoned heart by sorrow,
a child gleaming of hope.

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  • 16 years ago

    by thing3

    I love all the detail and the fantasy aspect. its expressive and has great imagery. a definate fav of mine. well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen of Spades

    Absolutely amazing, definitely my favorite of yours. The imagery was phenomenal. Keep your great work coming!

    ~jas~

  • 17 years ago

    by TearsInTheRain

    Really expressive. Luvd it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Strider

    Sounds like a perfect being to me..i liked how it started out very simple but then kept getting more complex.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Wow you actually created such a fantastic picture while i read through that which is a rather good talent =]=]
    that was a great poem i enjoyed reading it, keep it up =]=]=]

    ~*~Jen~*~