Really liked it it was really good 5/5

Aw this is kind of sad... but still good though. You write some of the sweetest poems. 5/5

marcella

Woah..intense! this was great nice job once again

This was so sad...yet such a beautiful write.
The imagery you used was wonderful.
I thought the flow was a little off in places but apart from that you did great job.

It was a beautiful poem with an underlying sadness to it, but you channeled the emotions very well

Beautifully written though very sad and painful 5/5 love the way you expressed yourself/feelings in this poem