A pledge from a friend

by we_all_live_to_die   Nov 5, 2006


You wanna give in..
To the pain in your heart...
Im here to make sure...
You dont fall completely apart...

When your in pain..
I feel it to..
So please just be strong..
I'll be right beside you..

Yeah, it will be hard...
We can fight till the end..
Your never alone..
A pledge from a friend..

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  • 16 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    Thats so sweet, what a lovely pledge....i loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle

    I LOVE IT!!! It's perfect! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~

    Its short, simple but very sweet... ur friend is lucky to have such a friend... i liked the flow, and the use of words showed the strong feelings of friendship with ur friend... loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by tearsbehindamask

    Loved how u didn't write a long poems. sometimes the best ones are short. like this one. love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Meet Me On Thames Street

    This poem was really good. It was short but still good. I liked the concept.
    5/5

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