Ver well written. it was kind of short, I was just getting into it, then it stoped. Maybe try making it a bit longer. The flow was good. There really weren't any rhymes, but that's ok, not all poems rhyme. Overall, wonderful poem.

Peace, Joe

It seems you put a lot of effort into this poem, its really good. I love your last stanza...

You painted a beautiful picture in my mind

Excellent
5/5

Its a good poem.
i understnad it and i love how original it is. you have a talent and i hope you find someway of using it in life. (other then on the site)

keep smilin'
~Emma

Very well written yoou have a talent!

I absolutely loved this poem. The only correction that I see you might need is on the third line of the second stanza, it reads:
in this field of thousand roses
I think the flow would work better if you put an a before thousand. But other than that you did an amazing job on describing everything and portraying your well thought out feelings. Great job on this! 5/5

Oh wow, you have quite away with words. This poem made me smile- I love the way you describe things. I am DEFINATELY adding you to my favorites and reading more from you. They way you write makes up for no rhyming, because normally, poems like that don't survive that well.

I like how this doesn't rhyme, but I can still feel what's going on. I like a rhythm to a poem, but the diction you used here was amazing. Awesome.

Very beautiful refreshing job. Great descriptions!

Very well written poem. a few times the rhythm gets a little off, but only ever by one syllable. you did a great job with the imagery, overall, well done!
:)

Soo, you say no one understands? I can clearly see this is about sex, ehem, or maybe that is just what's on my mind. Either way it was a great poem, and whatever it means it says it so beautifully ^_^

Sincerely,
~Richi

I really loved it. I can definately see why it's not in nature. :) 5/5