BEAUTIFUL! I loved this poem. You have done an excellent job. I love the wonderful message that you convey in this piece also. The flow was lovely and the fact that it's a free verse makes it even more excellent. I have a few suggestions though.In the fourth stanza, last line you wrote:

To discriminate the right and the wrong

I think that instead of using the word discriminate you should have used the word Separate. I think it sounds better.

Also in the fifth stanza:

Let me act in such a way
To spread happiness on my way
To uplift the downtrodden
To boost the spirits of those feeling low

I think that you could have done without using the word To in the beginning of each line. besides those two suggestions I think that you have done an excellent job hun. 5/.5 You deserve it and more. Keep up the wonderful work!

Love
Letty

P.S. I hope that I'll be seeing a new one from you soon.

I almost forgot' You should use some punctuation please. lol But it still was excellent.

Letty

This ones good :)

Let me act in such a way
To spread happiness on my way
To uplift the downtrodden
To boost the spirits of those feeling low

^^

Most beautiful stanza. I wish I had read this sooner, so I could have nominated it. A beautiful and spiritual poem, loved it:)

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

Portrays such a wonderful image in my mind. Beautifully written, 5/5. Em x