October Morning

I like the first two stanzas. It's a great
poem with a very nice flow. Thank you very
much on commenting my poem. Continue your wonderful writing. :) I give it a
5/5!!

Wow...that was great. Very deep. Keep it up

This poem is good...but i dont think its the best that you've written...i dont like how it is set up...but thats just my opinion and the flow kinda seemed off...i give you a 4/5 on this one.

Again the lay out brings alot to this poem have you ever tried writeing a hiaku? I belive you would be very good at this it seams like you have the write style.

This is cute little description of autumn