Comments : I DON'T

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    I love that, its really well written!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "You think I can't love you
    because you tried to replace me
    ( I CAN )"

    The ending is amazing, it really hits home how much love can be there.
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Aure

    The ending is very surprising and really shows something of real love. It's something to think deeply about it. The cause of the pain must be very hard but that you are able to still love her really means something.
    It's something you will never forget, and you shouldn't, but that the love hasn't died means a lot. I don't think many others would be able to love after such a thing.

    The poem is deeply written and explains perfectly what you're going through. Good work.
    Thumbs up for the poem and for you as a person.

  • 17 years ago

    by nicole

    I agree with jess, i love this one.

  • 17 years ago

    by Al

    Dude, thx the comments and wish i could have as much time as you got...lol, yeh so this poem is awesome, see so you have some good amazing love poems here. I'm gonna go and agree with people above your last line hit me right in a heart and i thought to myself that is real love, anyhoo write more poems like this..kl peace

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    Dude, you're blowin' my mind with every line. i mean ALL your work. so good.

  • 17 years ago

    by fakesmile

    I swear i love this poem! thanks for the comment.. its nice to know that you're not alone and ppl can feel your pain too..

  • 17 years ago

    by broken heart

    Well i cutt to let out pain and were i live u cant stay away from the drugs hes bin to mercy for the drugs and hes bin to jail he still hasnt faced realality and i hope u get better i live in illinios and ive tryed getting help for my addition but like i said im 14 and stubborn

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Hey.
    thanks for the comments.
    Great poem. =]
    5/5