No one knows

by *Isolde*   Nov 9, 2006


God oh god
Tell me why
Why'd you give it to me
When you knew it wasn't right for me?

Now i'm lying here
On my bed
Crying here
Feeling like I'm dead

My heart is now burning
I'm in much pain
I don't know if he loves me
I don't know if I'm insane

Every time I look at him
He smiles back at me
I don't know if he loves me
I don't know if its a game

Every time we go out
Someone always catches us
Please don't let them tell
Or else ill be in great hell

I don't want it to end like this
Because i'll get very pissed
I want us to be together
And always be forever

p.s-I really hope we last...

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  • 17 years ago

    by omen

    Personally, and this dosn't have to mean anything if you don't want it to, it has potential, but isn't quite there yet, it dosn't quite flow, but you do have skill, no doubt

  • 17 years ago

    by Rona

    Awww..well, just to answer
    "Why'd you give it to me
    When you knew it wasn't right for me?"
    From personal experience, we will always meet someone new, no matter what! So what ever we may be feeling with that someone we so-call love now, well, it'll heal in time =)
    I don't know if that helps.
    Anyway, back to the poem. I thought it was great! Well done! =)
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Mousie

    Aww, very cute, very pleading, i liked it. nice write

  • 17 years ago

    by Landi Cordier

    God oh God
    Why'd You give it to me
    When yYou knew it wasn't right for me

    the reason i capitalized the above letters is because - no matter what, when you're talking too or about God you always capitalize everything that has to do with Him

    I'm in SO much pain

    other than that this is a good poem! i like it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwh, this was really sad.
    I found it very powerful and moving, i really liked the wording, but i found the flow in some places jumpy.

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