Passion within

by Italian Stallion   Nov 9, 2006


Passion within
My heart I see
The light from above
Oh what could it be?

Passion within
Your smile I see
Nothing but the beauty of thee
Thee who holds the key to me

Passion within
My eyes I see
The wonderful girl
That is soon to be

Passion within
My soul I feel
Nothing but your warmth near
Oh how I wish it was so real

Passion within
Loving minds
As I kneel before you
And watch what Love finds

My heart is beating
Oh so fast
The presence of you
Makes it last

My eyes wondering
All over the place
I can't stop, but to look
At your face

Your smile is so big
Your eyes are watering
You let out a sigh
And say, "where have you been?

I've been searching
Every second, minute, week, month and year
To find the perfect man
I liked to be near

Here you are
Making my dreams come true
You're everything a woman wants
And that's why I love you dear
Of course I'll marry you"

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

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  • 14 years ago

    by Joshua Reimer

    Great poem the flow was awesome and you cut off the "passion within" beginning of the stanza at exactly the right time anymore and it would have been annoying so to speak, any less and i would be disappointed. all in all 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    *sighs* passion and love,,,,,, ah what a wonderful thing :) he he whos it about :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Well I'm not a very big fan of your flow.. But the emotion, rhyming, theme.. made up for it. The easy was to fix the flow is make sure each line beats together.. for example

    The breath from his soft velvet lips
    escaped into the air
    And from that hot breath, a hidden meaning
    Mysteries awaiting there.

    Its kinda choppy.. if you count the slylables(sp) you can get it right:

    The breath from his soft velvet lips
    Escaped into that cold night air
    In that hot breath, a hidden meaning
    So many mysteries awaiting there.

    yup yup. Hoped it helped

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Abu3li

    Passion within
    Your smile I see
    Nothing but the beauty of thee
    Thee who holds the key to me

    so beautiful

    i liked it the most

  • 16 years ago

    by CODACHROME

    I love this peom I can never really get Love poems quite right so I prefer to rite lost love ones as there right in my elament gr8 job 5/5

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