Comments : Passion within

  • 17 years ago

    by Jelz;; Oh,KillMeFast

    Oh, that made me go all ' awwww' =]

    the last stanza was my fave =D...
    I might just go and read some more of your stuff =D

    [..x..Dead.Roses..Jelz]

  • 17 years ago

    by sexc_Italian_girl

    It was beautiful!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Twilight

    OH WOW! O_O THATS BRILLIANT!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney

    This is an amazing, well written piece. LOVE it! It's really beautiful. Keep writing. o.~

    **Lor

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by one of the great poet here...... you have done a great job, and it is so greatly written.
    I really like your word choice here as well...........
    you are very talented........

    a 5/5 from me.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tess

    Again Mushy BUT sweet. Mushy but sweet. Its good to see you feel this way about someone seeing how it makes you happy. Great work. Your talent is definately the lovey dovey stuff. :)
    -Tess

  • 17 years ago

    by Roulin

    Thats such a sweet poem, any woman with any depth would love that!

    and your rythm is amazing, mind if I take a hint from that?

    xxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Awhhhhhhhhhh i love it. so friggin' cute. and it was like PERFECT. especially the last stanza, yo'. so. keep up the amazing work, hun.

  • Well im not usually a jelous person, but in this case, i reeli am... :~( i wish i could write good poetry like you...

  • 17 years ago

    by Kat_

    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    i LOVED that poem!! it was soo good!
    i can see the U have a PASSION for poetry!
    keep them comming!

    ``love``Katharine
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

  • 17 years ago

    by utsomniumunus

    I'm no big fan of love poetry but i like this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Wonderful poem u r really gr8!!!!

    God bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by mommyof2

    Good job keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a very well written peice, the repetition works brilliantly and your feelings are very clearly conveyed. not much else i can say really as nothing to fault and everyone else has pritty much said everything. great epice

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    This has to be one of my favourite love poems.
    I liked how you used the repetition for each stanza, it really got your feelings across.
    My favourite part was the imagery and flow, it worked very well.

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    I love how ur rhyme isnt always intentionaly uoi kinda just let it fall as it may which keeps ur reder guessing .

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Haha, I love this. I write from the other gender's perspective fairly often, so this was cool seeing someone else do it. However, I did notice that in all of your poems you use the word 'so' pretty consistently. That can be a good or bad thing. It definitely gives you your own "style of writing," but it can be repetitive. AND, I believe you meant woman in the last stanza, instead of women. Still an awesome poem! 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    Nery good poem joe, loved the flow, 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Awe. That's very sweet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a very beautiful poem. You can feel the love spilling from your words excellent Job!