When She's Alone {Parquette}

by Natalie   Nov 9, 2006


Tears roll down her cheeks when she's alone,
Sitting beneath the nights blackened dull sky,
Watching few synthetic shooting stars flash,
Leaning against baby brothers gravestone.

Tears roll down her cheeks when she's alone,
Begging for the chance to erase goodbye,
And the running mascara from her eyelash,
Which tarnished her skin from the tears she cries.

Tears roll down her cheeks when she's alone,
All her languished emotions begin to clash,
When lightening strikes from the sky up high,
Her fears are revealed with a sudden crash.

Tears roll down her cheeks when she's alone,
As she whispers to herself, "Why, why, why?",
Overwhelmed thoughts ponder with each gash,
Bleeding internally into the earths ash!

9th November 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie.

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-Parquette-

It has four stanzas, each containing four lines.The first line of the poem is repeated in every stanza as the first line. Each line except the first has 10-12 syllables. The rhyme scheme is "AbcaAbcbAcbcAbcc"

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  • 17 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    Wow that's realy sad!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    WOW! Taleee that was amazing. Wow. This was just excellent. The descriptions were filled with detail and every word you used held meaning. The flow was effortless and the emotion was so powerful. Wow, this was really excellent and so so sad. Wonderful work hun, Ily and cheer upp! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by dora

    U write ur poems so go0d very well written this one. i always admire ur various styles in writing and how well u write them. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    WOW! That is so good! You should write a book! 5/5++!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poetess Lana

    WOWEE!!!

    lubbed it! abosotively lubbed it!

    my favorite stanza was
    "Tears roll down her cheeks when she's alone,
    Begging for the chance to erase goodbye,
    And the running mascara from her eyelash,
    Which tarnished her skin from the tears she cries."

    um... and now i must go to school... so bye bye!

    Allanah