Hey darl, nice poem...should catch up soon...i miss you heaps and guess what. TODAY IS MY LAST DAY AS A YEAR 12 STUNDENT...YER...next week is stuff up week...and the after party is at mine...so drunk carn't wait...so youve got an job food on ya...should catch up....
love ya sarah

Ooh, this was beautiful Taleee! I loved it, the descriptions and imagery was breathtaking.. The flow worked well and the title is cute. The only problem I found was that to me "Beauty", "Within", and "Smiling" dont rhyme. "Within" and "Smiling" do, but "Beauty" does not. Maybe that is just the way I pronounce it though. Nicely done sweetie, 5/5

Great poem! Love the wording. You are every talented poet keep it up!

Awesome poem. Loved the imagery.

Nat Nat....neeki.....whatever lol

I reall enjoyed this poem because one image glided into the next with an easy transmission.

It painted a beautiful imagery.

This Poem Was Amaze'in, Itz Very Visualizable. You Have Quite An Imagination. I Envy You-LoL!5/5

This poem is so happy and natural. Keep'em comin'!

I've never seen this type before.
It's really interesting and your wording was excellent!
*Gem*