Very descriptive poem. I loved your word usage. The rhyming and flow was excellent.

Cold floors sends chills up anemic spines,
Feelings about love and hate cross lines,
^^ Excellent lines!

Fudge, Natalie!
you're writing is like.. wowwwwww.
for serious, now.
you're improving so much. i'm envious.

i actually think i'm getting WORSE. ha!

i love youuu!

Eh. that should have been 'your' not 'you're'.

eesh! stupid attack. lol

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Nice Poem. I Liked It A Lot. The Way You Used The Wordz To Flow Like That, Amaze'in. Keep It Up!5/5