Comments : Wow the feelings you make me feel

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a good poem nikki, great flow and structure, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. 5/5 Though I did think that the flow of the poem was a little off. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*SugarCube*~

    Great poem.
    You did a good job.
    5/5

    ~Chelsea

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    Comment #3

    "And I love that you know what im saying with out saying anything at all"

    I can relate to that
    I think a lot of people can
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    In this line:

    "In way I feel we have this special bond"

    I think you should take out 'in way'

    And in this:

    "And to able to hold your hand"

    You should at 'be' in between to and able so it would be And to be able to hold you hand. Thats just my opinion. Buts its a very cute and sweet poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Oh I forgot

    "In way I feel we have this special bond"

    Or you could put an a in between in and way. So it'd be In A way I feel we have this special bond.

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    OMG I love this poem. I think I'll add it to my favs =}
    Very good job on this one. It was perfectly written and I liked your usage of vocabulary. Most people just use words and dont really know what they mean...But this one just explains your feelings perfectly
    5/5

    PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

  • 16 years ago

    by NiGhTpRiNcEsS

    I love this poem!!! very good one! keep up the good work...perfectly written =))

    ~NiGhTpRiNcEsS~

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    Beautiful!
    Absolutely amazing!
    Feeling is great!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    Beautiful!
    Absolutely amazing!
    Feeling is great!
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Truly and deeply love this piece, well written full of emotion. 5/5, Em