Comments : One year ago today

  • 17 years ago

    by just katie

    Wow you are really great and keep up your wonderful poems..

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5. Amazing. So sad. I loved it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Thank you i appreciate it

  • 17 years ago

    by Bianca

    Wow you left me really speachless. wow!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Woah... This is really great!! It has an excellent flow, and excellent usage of vocab. Its really really sad, im sorry that this happened to you :-( Still great job! Keep writing! xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohh...I'm crying again...you really know how to touch a nerve with the reader...this was amazing, so sad yet so beautifully written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Im In Love What Can I Say

    Man that is sad i like it...again im sorry for your mom...5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    If you read the poetry the way it is supposed to be read theres really no problem with flow

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Wow this is so sad. An amazing write! So much emotion while keeping up a great flow. Wonderful write! 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    OMG this has so much emotion and the words are written perfectly i really like the ending

  • 17 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    That made me cry so sad so heartfelt xx x

  • 16 years ago

    by silvershoes

    Very depressing and relatable (to an unfortunate some). Good writing, and I'm sorry this happened to your friends, may they both rest in peace. This is why I rarely drink, and NEVER drink and drive.

  • 16 years ago

    by xo kisses xo

    Beautiful! great poem! so true. 5/5

    xo kisses xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. It was like a movie in my head. I gave it a 5/5. It was great.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    So depressive..amazingly affective...u started from the beginning with this relation with words to capture readers...
    i must say this was interesting

    He knows exactly where he's going
    A place where death isn't hard to find

    and ur closing line
    was just so ..hmm..donu touchy..
    5/5