Baby, I love you

by Karl Wild GG23   Nov 13, 2006


Standing in the bathroom
In front of her mirror
Looking deep into her soul
Trying to conquer every fear

She thinks and wonders what happened
Between her and her man
Where did she go wrong
She just doesn't understand

She opens up the cupboard door
And pulls out the sharpest razor
She knows in minutes she'll be dead
But that just cannot faze her

As she pulls the blade across her wrist
One last time she cries out his name
The pain makes her clench her fist
Lives will never again be the same

Thin blood as red as paint
Starts to shoot from her open vain
Why did he tell her goodbye?
And cause her so much pain

As death grabs her hand
There is nothing she can do
Her last words are spoken
They are " Baby, I love you.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Girl of Conviction

    Great writing :]]

  • 15 years ago

    by rebecca

    Your hot

  • 16 years ago

    by maggielou

    This is heart clenching.

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is so sad....i really really enjoyed reading this piece...it flowed nicely and the rhyming was perfect..nice job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie Cain

    Good poem