Quiet girl

by mathiax   Nov 14, 2006


There once was a small girl
she was quiet as a mouse not daring to make a single sound
too scared of what that would lead
she always hid behind her shadow of sadness and disturbed happiness that threatened to make her scream!
but still the girl was quite as a mouse
trapped in her little hole of doom where she tries to hold on to sanity
she knew she couldn't no matter how much she tried or hoped
she wouldn't succeed and the darkness would swallow her at last
so she trapped herself in her own creation
her mind's world of wonderful dreams and amazing fantasies
a world where she could be rescued by a night in shining armor like a maiden in distress
a world where she had a perfect family, a perfect home and a perfect life
but she returns to reality sometimes
where her world and the real world are the complete opposite
where she must run and hide in her little mouse hole before the world's clutches captures her
one day she was rescued and set free by her guardian angel
a guardian angel that6 she has known all her life
an angel of a person that she loves with all her heart and feels as if they were one
an angel that showed her the happiness and the real sadness of the world
an angel that advised her and told her of her knowledge in life
advices that5 she cherishes and holds dear to her heart
knowledge that she gained and matured thanks to it
an angel that taught her how to have a voice
a voice that the quiet girl used and had a choice for her life at last
she shall never give up.....she shall never surrender because now she has a voice
a voice and a choice and she's not willing to give them up for anyone
no matter how much they asked or how much they demanded or pleaded
she will never give her voice up now that she has one at last!
and she shall always be thankful and owe that angel her life!!!

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  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    IM THE ONE WHO SHOULD BE CRYING NOT YOU!!!!! that angel is the most wonderful person in this whole world for that little girl. she's her gaurdian that has guided her to the right track and without that angel she would have been lost in this world and she would have definaltly ended up in the WRONG track if you know what i mean... I LOVE YOU BI!!!!!! THNX FOR EVERYTHING!!!! OWE YOU BIG TIME!!!!!!!!!=( SNIFF SNIFF

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!! I FEEL LIKE CRYING NOW THAT I KNEW WHO THE ANGEL IS !!

    love u hun !!!! =( sniff sniff..

  • 17 years ago

    by Boogie

    ANOTHER GREAT POEM WRITTEN BY MAI !!!

    keeep them coming hun .. ;)

    5/5 !

  • 17 years ago

    by mathiax

    Thnx!!! but it wasnt my best poem.....ill try to acheive better next time!

  • 17 years ago

    by locky

    Another good poem mai great writing