Fallen Defences [Haiku]

Three S's - Short, Sweet and Straight to the point.

Really well done. I liked it a lot. Nice imagery created.

Hmm, myself im not a big fan of Haiku,but i liked the imagery of the poem, great job once again.

This an interesting poem. It makes sense, but in away, I have a sense that it's relating to humans as well.

Really neat imagery. Just an idea...

instead of petals being the defence, maybe try thorns? I don't know I think I'm attempting to re-write your entire poem.

Thorns slowly turn dull
Roses left without defence
Foes prey on weak hearts

Up to you cyber wifey! Awesome job anyways! woohoo!

I like it. 5/5. I really don't know what to say about it. I have never tried to right a poem in that style. You did a great job at it. Keep it up.

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