Awe. This is nice and short, but it doesn't really speak to me. I'm not a Haiku master, sorry. :[ 4/5

I think you did an excellent job of this. I think its very detailed and i love how you used the last line. like preying on a defenceless person. So amazingly written in such a short poem. I love it. Keep it up. =] 5/5

Tammie

I must say that the Haiku is my favourite form of poetry. This poem was sweet, sad and memorable, and an absolute joy to read. Beautiful work, once more. *claps*

Wow amazing job on this Haiku. i really like it a lot! 5/5

~Kristina

I like it. 5/5. I really don't know what to say about it. I have never tried to right a poem in that style. You did a great job at it. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Really neat imagery. Just an idea...

instead of petals being the defence, maybe try thorns? I don't know I think I'm attempting to re-write your entire poem.

Thorns slowly turn dull
Roses left without defence
Foes prey on weak hearts

Up to you cyber wifey! Awesome job anyways! woohoo!

This an interesting poem. It makes sense, but in away, I have a sense that it's relating to humans as well.

Hmm, myself im not a big fan of Haiku,but i liked the imagery of the poem, great job once again.

Three S's - Short, Sweet and Straight to the point.

Really well done. I liked it a lot. Nice imagery created.