Wow, amazingly written poem. Loved the structure and wording. 5/5.
Much love, Emma xox

Beautifully written... keep it up.. u have talent

I really liked this poem it was awesome and so greatly written!!! The whole poem is great in general

Hey that is good u r really a good writter

Wow, Special, you are really good! Keep it up!

I love this. Is this based on a true story? Like, maybe yours?

Great poem. some ppl probs dnt see it but if well thought about it has many meanings towards life

Hey this poem Is Very Moving !! I like It a lot Don't Stop !!

Excellent poem. 5/5 i like the little humour on the end with the search for the key. i like this poem its so different to what i'm used to reading well done. keep writing

I absolutely love this poem. it's very well written and your words are put together so well. 5/5. it's very different from what i'm used to, which is awesome, cause i like when there's a little turn to poetry. very very good job. keep it up, write some more. i'd love to read

heidi.may

Wow i loved it! and its very true! And ur words are so expressive! and like the old type of poems..it was awesome ur a great poet! keep it up!

Hey this is good
pain does leave one cripple within
good job*_o i dont know what that is

Wow i like the poem it is realy good

Awesome write, but yet again, the structure is not good, it is in the form of paragraphs, almost like a story, trying breaking it into Stanzas.

Peace, Joe

Really good give it a 5/5

The only thing that i can really say is WOW thats great!
keep it up.

Nice i loved it =) keep it

Woo jase i like this pem it's Interesting and acuse the use of the word....Beautiful...