Unmasked Lies

by Cella Bella   Nov 16, 2006


You come to me
In disguise
As Honesty
To scar me
With your infidelities
And curse me
With my insecurities

Now unmasked

You come to me
Unable to hide
I see through you
All the lies,
Your shame,
Your guilt,
It's in your eyes

*edited 8.6.07 I added a second part to this one, which is a little poem I wrote a long time ago.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Vanessa

    This was amazing by far the best poem I have read tonight. the flow was flawless, the imagery vivd and the emotion was deep. again another job well done, on such a dark peice.5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This was a deep and heartfelt poem it had a lot of meaning and i liked it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    This also is a great yet sad poem. made me wanting more. i just wanted to keep on reading and reading, great job

    5/5 David

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. i really like this.. short and simple words.. but still strong.. the emotion was great and expressed really well considering you only had a couple of short lines.. also the rhyme was spectacular .. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    I really like this. Its short yet very meaningful. So much meaning and emotion fills the lines. The usage of words was GREAT! and it had an excellent flow through it. Its so short, and the message of it is sraight to the point - i like that alot about it. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more! xx

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