Nice work I love the concept!!!

Wow.. REALLY good.. good choice of vocab.. A++... please chek out my poems! comment, vote.. such and such.. love your work

Very nice poem. I like the way you described everything. I must add that this is one of the best dragon poems I've read in a while. Keep up the writing! 5/5

Ohmigosh! This poem rocks.

Soarer
((I'm pretty sure that's not a word...But, it may be.))

I really enjoyed reading this.. It's a very unquie topic and the words you tried to use seemed force, but not badly forced. I think it is well written. Again, using punctuation will help the flow, but it is only a suggestion. Take care. Great job.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Haha, you are correct--soarer is not a real word, but what is poetry after all? Freedom of expression. You should read my profile, I mention the made up words.