Comments : The dentist

  • 10 years ago

    by kiara

    I luv this its funny but true 5/5
    that happens to me all the time lol n now i g2g get stupid surgery becoz i was born with crappy teeth lol
    well i really luvd this 1 keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by nicole

    Haha thats awsome soo soo very true too nice flow yo lol i gotta get my wisdom teeth out so that should be fun

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    "And what about the lady
    who stabs and pokes your teeth
    it's almost like she's trying
    to see whats underneath"

    hehe, that stanza made me laugh out loud.
    It was brilliant! Got the dentist spot on!
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Bianca

    Funny and cute i like it

  • 10 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Hahaha, this gave me the giggles, I thought it was excellent and true.

  • 10 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    This is so true... actually had a dentist who stabbed my gums and they started to bleed like crazy!! but nice job its funny!!

  • 10 years ago

    by beav

    Awesome. hilarious. and every word of it-true! i'm finding all these wierd connections to your work. i also have a poem titled 'the dentist'. if you ever read it, you'll find that it's pretty different from this. once again, you have written an excellent poem. "mad skills" and a devotion to the essense of poetry! you rock, big time. :) -beav

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    Reading this humorous piece amuses me thoroughly. I regularly visit my dentist after every 15 days has passed to, once again, tighten up the hold of my braces. Thus my correlation with this poem. Your annoyance is completely evident, and the way you've written this in a grimly manner is entertaining....very nice write, indeed. ^_^ Debbie

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol....this one was cool...awesome...lol...i really loved this 1...soo funny...lol..positive..n true!
    Kp writing!
    another 5/5
    xxPoojaxx

  • 10 years ago

    by Allison

    I really enjoyed the humor off this poem and I'll probably think about it next time I'm at the dentist. ^.^ This was really creative and flowed nicely. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 10 years ago

    by Kaila

    Haha very cute
    I too hate the dentist
    and all these things are so true
    they really have no business in your mouth lol
    nice job once again

  • 10 years ago

    by Teria

    Haha. Cute poem. :]
    I loved it.
    I hate the dentist as well.
    I loved how you wrote this, cute.
    Great flow too, and wording.
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was really interesting,the feelings you get out and 'the woman'...lol
    But I hated the fact that my dad is a dentist and far away from the figure you made here
    It was an enjoyable read
    Have funny days,
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Dee

    This mad me smile... funny and true well done

  • 10 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Haha this poem was cute. It sounded just like something you'd find in one of those children's poetry books. I loved it, it was funny and quite entertaining 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Anaisthitos

    Haha this poem was cute. It sounded just like something you'd find in one of those children's poetry books. I loved it, it was funny and quite entertaining 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Riz

    LOL The beginning was so funny! My first time to the dentist was annoying, I got scared because of the drills but I wasn't worst than my big bro. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    Hahah this is funny..

    "Don't you lie to me I'm the boss".

    i love that line. haha.. very nicee and very truee.. excellent job once again =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Spirit

    Thanks i needed that
    5/5
    Sam Mayo

  • 10 years ago

    by Sara

    Hahah, well that definitly made me laughhh... great work, and that is definitly dentists for ya haha... 5/5 from me, and keep up the great workk

    what can i say, your pretty amazingg
    xoSaraa