Once again, awesome poem! Love the flow, the words you use, everything. 5 from me, beautiful work!

I love your poem

Hey there were some cliche rhymes, but the flow was pretty good. so a 5/5 for this cuz i really liked reading it in the end

Wonderful Poem. I loved it, and thank you for enterning my contest. The flow and the structure was good. And the Rhyming was ok, you had a few cliche rhymes, But overall wonderful peice.

Ciao, Joe

I enjoyed your poem a lot. I felt every emotion and feeling you where when you wrote this. Which is what poetry is all about.