Poisonous Release

by Jessica   Nov 20, 2006


In a pool of scarlet tears, she drowns
Breathing in each drop of toxic air
Another poisonous release she downs
As evil takes over her, she is unaware..

Demons swarming under her fragile skin
Glassy eyes becoming windows into hell
Giving in to desires, letting immorality win
Secrets in leaking veins, she must never tell..

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  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Demons swarming under her fragile skin
    ((I liked these lines...))
    Secrets in leaking veins, she must never tell
    ((And loved the way you explained this analogy... Very strong, very nice.))

    I liked this. It was different, and it just seemed to flow nicely. The rhyme wasn't noticed for me, which is good for that means it wasn't forced. Good job.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. beautifully written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Say Goodbye and Go

    The imagination on this poem is great........keep writing

    -Say goodbye and Go :)

  • 17 years ago

    by ~*~ w8ñGïñÐÄrÄïñ ~*~

    Excellent poem.. short.. but it says everything.. 5/5.. :o)

  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulxMess

    Awesome! Love your poems. They're amazing! 5/5!
    God Bless.

    ~*TAy*~

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