This sounds like a sort of acceptance of rape...acceptance, but at the same time completelyl defiance. you're willing to accept that he did that to your body, but you know that deep down inside, you are what you are, and that no one, not even that b*****d, can do anything to change that...I like that mentality, and it made for an intense and thoughtful poem

Keep it up

Excepting it can work for you but i can also tell you've not let your gaurd down will you ever very good your a role model to all those who do not have the guts to express what has happened to them

A very powerful write. A real sense of strength from within seems show throught the poem. Amazing. Take care

Kelly
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Have just now read a couple of your poems. You write with such raw passion and emotion. Your words scream in my head... and my heart.

Good Job
Jeannie

This is great! Very powerful and beautiful! I love it!
xoxo

I love this poem

This poem reminds me of myself.. really powerful... kepp up the good work!!!

Impressive. You do a masterful job of describing the inner fight you would have of not letting something consume you and overtake your body, mind, or soul. It would be very easy to give in to such doubts and let something have control over you. It is very easy to see what a strong willed person you are from your writing. To use such beautiful words to describe such a terrible event is simply amazing.

Extremly powerful words are wriiten in this work. Beautfully written , nice flow, well pinned, good job, your very talented and i believe you will go far with with this in life. 5/5