Comments : Lost At Sea

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    This is a very good and sad poem, great job storm, 5/5!!! keep it up!!! loved it. congrats for the POW.

    the one and only Bryan,

  • 17 years ago

    by TheRevelation

    Great job BRAVO BRAVO!! *clapping*
    my favorite part of all was:"A smile plays across her lavender lips; she laughs
    Remembering moments of sweet love embrace"
    for some reason that stood out to me but it was gorgeous the whole thing was beautiful.
    ~~nicole

  • 17 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is both sad and beautuiful, melancholy and full of love, the imsgery and use of laguage is very impressive, the flow and rhyme sceme is spot on.But it is the emotion that stands out.I will definitely be checking out more of your work.

    Peace, Poetry, & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 17 years ago

    by Lore

    Wow your amazing, I love your style of poetry and only wish I could do partially as well. I felt such a sense of grief and desolation when I read that it brought tears to my eyes.

  • 16 years ago

    by katrina porter

    This is a great poem you write very well i hope you well bring up a future with it. Keep up the good work

  • 16 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Incredible, awesome, great poem. great format, great pacing, great job

    your servant:
    david.